i dont know how to feel about this poem. i like it although it's slightly scary. it's well written until the icecream part *i just did get how that fit in there* BUT overall a nice job.

Even when you are not depressed your poetry is scary..you say that you are not scared of dying but i think it is just the opposite, it seems like you are in denial..for your sake i hope these poems dont reflect your life:(

That was really good! I love them, this is kinda a review for a couple of your poems, and I totally love them! Keep up the good work!

Three, such a number eh? Ah well, I see. Reis'Dem'Naca!