Without the author's note I would think differently about this.

The words in this poem are quite powerful. There is such deep, raw, anguished emotions in this.

"Believe in me, like I will never again Believe in you...Trust me, like I will never again Trust you...Love me, like I will never again Love you" These convey so much to the readers.

Was this about your parents? If so, I am so very sorry. I hope you can come to forgiveness in time.

Much love...TinuvielDork

The emotions of this are completley understandable...I can connect to the feelings in this poem very well...It was a very good poem, and it was a very...deep poem! ^_^

Wonderful, I can relate to, venting about this and about people. Nice work. Keep writing, s.

Beautiful writing. Very deep and powerful and heartfelt. I loved the pattern you maintained in the words, and the flow of the poem. Very beautiful and sad.The only part that didn't seem to fit was the "Love me...love you" in the 3rd stanza. Unless its a personal thing that the reader wouldn't get. Other than that. Great. Keep it up!

--Meme

I love the repetitious lines at the end of each stanza, really pulls the poem together. This makes me feel so sad and broken-hearted, excellent job conveying emotion. Keep writing. :)