AW! I love it! Such good words, and all the folding and dripping can be seen-very Daliesque-the last line is awesome. Only the line "seeping in black holes & celestial planets" 's nouns seemed too typical for your otherwise innovating words. Of course planets are celestial...:) Great job.

i feel a trend with you and your starsand many things are dripping

we could all moving to pouringand watch the rain

wow just impressive. i think this is my favourite poem of yours so far. nice work.

Wow! This is so beautiful!

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enduring, delectable imagery. this is a fabulous poem... beautiful work.