|Reviews for wish|
| Nemonus 4/5/06 . chapter 1
AW! I love it! Such good words, and all the folding and dripping can be seen-very Daliesque-the last line is awesome. Only the line "seeping in black holes & celestial planets" 's nouns seemed too typical for your otherwise innovating words. Of course planets are celestial...:) Great job.
| Aquafied 4/4/06 . chapter 1
i feel a trend with you and your starsand many things are dripping
we could all moving to pouringand watch the rain
| breezy nostrils 4/4/06 . chapter 1
wow just impressive. i think this is my favourite poem of yours so far. nice work.
| MidnightStar005 4/4/06 . chapter 1
Wow! This is so beautiful!
| Smoky Bear 4/4/06 . chapter 1
enduring, delectable imagery. this is a fabulous poem... beautiful work.