| Reviews for i saw you |
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littlest clouds 12/10/06 . chapter 1I want to add this to my favorites, dammit. |
boys kiss girls 4/24/06 . chapter 1beautiful descriptions here. |
insomnia in dreamland 4/15/06 . chapter 1god this was so fucking emotional i almost started crying(im such a pussy for things like this)i cant explain it, it just captured me and drew me into it so incredibly deeply. i cant help but love this. *faves* |
nofaceme 4/12/06 . chapter 1The first line on this was amazing. I loved the description. And as usual, the poem blew me away. It's very unique! |
not sure yet 4/10/06 . chapter 1o, damn girl, i love this one times a bajillion too, so amazing and pretty and simple yet cloud like and good imagery and this is amazing and youre amazing and just incredible job |
dancingintherain 4/10/06 . chapter 1so so very cute and sweet! i like the whole space thing and the last line was just adorable )) keep writing! |
in theory 4/7/06 . chapter 1"I was almost dreamer sure"...that statement is so futile and paradoxical and just absofuckinglutely perfect. Love. |
coal and marigolds 4/6/06 . chapter 1Very cool image. |
Chemically Induced 4/6/06 . chapter 1the poem jumps around like a bushytail rabbit from one great imaage to the next. the whole second stanza is fantastic and a half. i also liked the sounds of, "test tube ready." excellente! :) love . |
classic violet 4/6/06 . chapter 1you seemed to make baseball so beautiful. just, wow! "collide with jupiter, knock pluto / from the solar maps / and come out of the dragon's jaw / with star scales glazed into the skin" Dear Lord, those lines were perfect. Simply simply perfect. Beautiful poem. |
water lily nymph 4/6/06 . chapter 1sweet, it kind of reminds me of some sort of science project affair in elementary school. nerdy love. :) |
forsakensmile 4/6/06 . chapter 1The dreamy quality once again shines in this poem, but you've written much better. |
i heart that guy 4/5/06 . chapter 1Very awesome imagery. I loved it loads, especially "making the whole science community arrive at my doorstep, test tube ready to break me down into organic dust." ha, love it. Keep it up! |
Needa S 4/5/06 . chapter 1lol Great images, awesome write. |
mezzie 4/5/06 . chapter 1(you're right, it smelled entirely of boy) -rubs eyes- oh, here i am. this is: a perfect write, all it should be. catches the beautiful half-blinded half-visionary and completely exalting sense of shooting hearts falling in love. mezzie and, your reviews are the bestest. they always make me feel better : ) |