I want to add this to my favorites, dammit.

beautiful descriptions here.

god this was so fucking emotional i almost started crying(im such a pussy for things like this)i cant explain it, it just captured me and drew me into it so incredibly deeply. i cant help but love this. *faves*

The first line on this was amazing. I loved the description. And as usual, the poem blew me away. It's very unique!

o, damn girl, i love this one times a bajillion too, so amazing and pretty and simple yet cloud like and good imagery and this is amazing and youre amazing and just incredible job

so so very cute and sweet! i like the whole space thing and the last line was just adorable )) keep writing!

"I was almost dreamer sure"...that statement is so futile and paradoxical and just absofuckinglutely perfect. Love.

Very cool image.

the poem jumps around like a bushytail rabbit from one great imaage to the next. the whole second stanza is fantastic and a half. i also liked the sounds of, "test tube ready." excellente! :)

love .

you seemed to make baseball so beautiful. just, wow!

"collide with jupiter, knock pluto / from the solar maps / and come out of the dragon's jaw / with star scales glazed into the skin"

Dear Lord, those lines were perfect. Simply simply perfect. Beautiful poem.

sweet, it kind of reminds me of some sort of science project affair in elementary school. nerdy love. :)

The dreamy quality once again shines in this poem, but you've written much better.

Very awesome imagery. I loved it loads, especially "making the whole science community arrive at my doorstep, test tube ready to break me down into organic dust." ha, love it. Keep it up!

lol Great images, awesome write.

(you're right, it smelled entirely of boy)

-rubs eyes- oh, here i am. this is: a perfect write, all it should be. catches the beautiful half-blinded half-visionary and completely exalting sense of shooting hearts falling in love.

mezzie

and, your reviews are the bestest. they always make me feel better : )