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just to reach you 2006-12-10 . chapter 1
I want to add this to my favorites, dammit.
boys kiss girls 2006-04-24 . chapter 1
beautiful descriptions here.
insomnia in dreamland 2006-04-15 . chapter 1
god this was so ** emotional i almost started crying(im such a ** for things like this)i cant explain it, it just captured me and drew me into it so incredibly deeply. i cant help but love this. *faves*
e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2006-04-12 . chapter 1
The first line on this was amazing. I loved the description. And as usual, the poem blew me away. It's very unique!
not sure yet 2006-04-10 . chapter 1
o, damn girl, i love this one times a bajillion too, so amazing and pretty and simple yet cloud like and good imagery and this is amazing and youre amazing and just incredible job
dancingintherain 2006-04-10 . chapter 1
so so very cute and sweet! i like the whole space thing and the last line was just adorable =)) keep writing!
in theory 2006-04-07 . chapter 1
"I was almost dreamer sure"...that statement is so futile and paradoxical and just abso**inglutely perfect. Love.
coal and marigolds 2006-04-06 . chapter 1
Very cool image.
Chemically Induced 2006-04-06 . chapter 1
the poem jumps around like a bushytail rabbit from one great imaage to the next. the whole second stanza is fantastic and a half. i also liked the sounds of, "test tube ready." excellente! :)

love c.induced.
classic violet 2006-04-06 . chapter 1
you seemed to make baseball so beautiful. just, wow!

"collide with jupiter, knock pluto / from the solar maps / and come out of the dragon's jaw / with star scales glazed into the skin"

Dear Lord, those lines were perfect. Simply simply perfect. Beautiful poem.
water lily nymph 2006-04-06 . chapter 1
sweet, it kind of reminds me of some sort of science project affair in elementary school. nerdy love. :)
forsakensmile 2006-04-06 . chapter 1
The dreamy quality once again shines in this poem, but you've written much better.
i heart that guy 2006-04-05 . chapter 1
Very awesome imagery. I loved it loads, especially "making the whole science community arrive at my doorstep, test tube ready to break me down into organic dust." ha, love it. Keep it up!
Needa S 2006-04-05 . chapter 1
lol Great images, awesome write.
mezzie 2006-04-05 . chapter 1
(you're right, it smelled entirely of boy)

-rubs eyes- oh, here i am. this is: a perfect write, all it should be. catches the beautiful half-blinded half-visionary and completely exalting sense of shooting hearts falling in love.

mezzie

and, your reviews are the bestest. they always make me feel better : )
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