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NightRayne 2009-06-12 . chapter 17
GAH! you havent updated for 2 years and 6 months! ugh...not good...i have read your other two stories to the point where you have stopped and im freaking out because there is none left to give me my fix! ahh...i love your stories...please dont abandon me and bernard and varano and roscoe and kamau and jiya and sharif and me! we miss you!
13 desserts of you most fantastical disires,
Rayne
AngelandDemon 2009-05-28 . chapter 17
really great stories!!
Keita01 2009-02-06 . chapter 17
Very nice story. I really liked it. I hope everything will turn out ok though. With the hold Bernard's secret identity, and the hole Antino situation. I wander how long that secret will stay a secret though. lol

Hurry and update. ^_^
Keita01 2009-02-05 . chapter 14
Just marking my spot. ^_^ But I really really do like it so far.
Keita01 2009-02-02 . chapter 8
Very interesting. I like it so far. Just reviewing to mark my place.
Bluorange 2008-04-05 . chapter 3
Heehee... Leash fetish. I love Jessie, he's so cute ^-^ Yay! Your characters are so funny and cute. There are a few spelling and typing mistakes, nothing big though. This story is awesome so far!

~Rock On, Peace Out~
Lardlax 2007-12-19 . chapter 1
Oh, a dancer? In a gay bar I hope :p
I'm enjoying this, but I did notice some mistakes. It's really just a spellchecker thing though, and nobody's perfect, so I'm not going to be really harsh about them. I have picked 2 examples:

" I'm Bernard by the wasy."
"waited for the elecator doors to open"

It's not like they're major problems or anything though.

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Trunks
WizardsGirl 2007-07-27 . chapter 17
Okay, not much happened, but it was still a fine peice of writing!
WizardsGirl 2007-07-27 . chapter 16
Aw. That's sweet!! But it draws the question, Why the hell are all the sweet, affectinet, hot men either gay or married? Life sucks for us single women. Ah, well, the strong survive and learn from obsticles they have to overcome.
WizardsGirl 2007-07-27 . chapter 15
O! Enigma!! YAY!! Lol!! And Antino sounds REALLY interesting...lol!! There goes my attraction to bad guys again!
WizardsGirl 2007-07-27 . chapter 14
Okay, a nice twist came to mind. Rafael is working for the mob that's after Varano. And he's there spying with a plot to kidnap Varano, and Bernard has to sneak him away to somewhere. ANYway...It's a thought.
WizardsGirl 2007-07-27 . chapter 13
Cool. Lol! Bernard is now Fairy Boy! J/k lol!
WizardsGirl 2007-07-27 . chapter 12
Very nice! I liked the whole "No more stitches!" thing. :)
WizardsGirl 2007-07-27 . chapter 11
Very nices! Can't wait to read more!
WizardsGirl 2007-07-27 . chapter 10
Nice little drama with the pissy teach jumping to conclusions. (And the preview SO doesn't sound like crap! It sounds intrigueing!!)
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