Again, the last few lines really struck me...kind of a looming darkness after that pretty floating love song. Very beautiful use of descriptives again. Reminded me of an old-fashioned love poem. sweet.

wonderful style, another brilliant poem. i very much enjoy your work.

honorata

Woah...amazing...

Kathryn

All I can say is SUPER YAY I loved it. The imgaery, the repition (in a good way, and the tone shifting from blissful to hopeful to a twinge of sadness. Definitely a favorite author definitely a favorite poem.-Press

This would make good song lyrics...

Dreamily beautiful.

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It's fun to try out new stlyles and all and I think you did a good job with this one. I prefer your normal style to be honest, but that's not to say this wasn't good. *shrugs* Not too sure I understand the last line eihter... Your typo or my misunderstanding?

Woah. This is amazing. I love the way that you di Y

Very nice poem. Very different. Its always good to do different every once in a while.

Great flow, nicely done.

This poem is just lovely, with its short lines and beautiful language. Take care and keep writing.

EB

Beautiful darling. You do well with this style. Wonderful to see you writing again. Keep it up!

Love,Hawke