I like this poem alot, its got a sad numb feeling to it.

Awesome, although it takes a minute to get the last line, you should try changing it so it's easier to understand and so your poem doesn't seem so abrupt. This is just friendly criticism, feel free to criticize me anytime!Awesome poem! Good job!

Heartfelt and honest; I loved your narration. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.