|Reviews for My life as is|
| A. J. L 5/30/06 . chapter 1
Nice! I can totally relate. There's always that hope that things will get more exciting, eh?
| Zure 4/23/06 . chapter 3
Hmn, really cool...you should google "a softer world" if you haven't heard of it before. Your poems remind me of the guys writing
| multiples of six 4/7/06 . chapter 4
Yeah, I like all of these. I think my favourite might be #3 or #4 though. Nice job. )
| multiples of six 4/7/06 . chapter 2
Wow, I love the third-last line.
| coal and marigolds 4/4/06 . chapter 1
Simple, but it was a nice read nonetheless. )
| chaos called creation 4/4/06 . chapter 1
This flows very nice. I think you could make the ending better, a more big of an impact but good poem overall.
| Devil-In-The-Wishing-Well 4/4/06 . chapter 1
I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL...life can be boring sometimes. But we all need to hang in there. ...ditww
| Faithless Juliet 4/4/06 . chapter 1
I didn't really like it until the end - I think it's in finding the "meaning" in the little things that often times make the best poems. Very interesting perspective though, keep up the good work.