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| A. J. L. 2006-05-30 ch 1,  | abuseNice! I can totally relate. There's always that hope that things will get more exciting, eh? |
| Zure 2006-04-23 ch 3, anon. | abuseHmn, really cool...you should google "a softer world" if you haven't heard of it before. Your poems remind me of the guys writing |
| multiples of six 2006-04-07 ch 4, | abuseYeah, I like all of these. I think my favourite might be #3 or #4 though. Nice job. =) |
| multiples of six 2006-04-07 ch 2, | abuseWow, I love the third-last line. |
| coal and marigolds 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuseSimple, but it was a nice read nonetheless. =) |
| chaos called creation 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuseThis flows very nice. I think you could make the ending better, a more big of an impact but good poem overall. |
| Devil-In-The-Wishing-Well 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuseI KNOW HOW YOU FEEL...life can be boring sometimes. But we all need to hang in there. ...ditww |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuseI didn't really like it until the end - I think it's in finding the "meaning" in the little things that often times make the best poems. Very interesting perspective though, keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |