 A. J. L. 2006-05-30 . chapter 1Nice! I can totally relate. There's always that hope that things will get more exciting, eh? |
 Zure 2006-04-23 . chapter 3 Hmn, really cool...you should google "a softer world" if you haven't heard of it before. Your poems remind me of the guys writing |
 multiples of six 2006-04-07 . chapter 4Yeah, I like all of these. I think my favourite might be #3 or #4 though. Nice job. =) |
 multiples of six 2006-04-07 . chapter 2Wow, I love the third-last line. |
 coal and marigolds 2006-04-04 . chapter 1Simple, but it was a nice read nonetheless. =) |
 chaos called creation 2006-04-04 . chapter 1This flows very nice. I think you could make the ending better, a more big of an impact but good poem overall. |
 Devil-In-The-Wishing-Well 2006-04-04 . chapter 1I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL...life can be boring sometimes. But we all need to hang in there. ...ditww |
 Faithless Juliet 2006-04-04 . chapter 1I didn't really like it until the end - I think it's in finding the "meaning" in the little things that often times make the best poems. Very interesting perspective though, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet. |