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| JC-Saved-Me 2006-10-22 ch 1,  | abuseDeep and some what complex but all the same a good piece of inspiration! I like to reflect of what has happened these past two years and how far God has actually brought me. He took me out of so much stuff and I'm forever thankful! We must look ahead :-) Much in Him, xRx |
| Maranwe Telrunya 2006-09-14 ch 1, | abuseVery good. I love the message, and the last line is quite powerful. The one word that came to mind in the first moments after reading this was "Wow." =D Maranwe Telrunya |
| Storekeeper 2006-05-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! Excellent write. Keep on posting, you are very talented. |
| mountaingurl 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abuseWow! Beautifil! You are very talented, your words flow with ease. Excellent write. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseWow. You blow me away. I'm honoured to have received reviews from someone like you. Excellent poetry, great work! Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Nehelia Silverlode 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseWow! Awesome. I especially loved the part about drowning in sin and needing to go to the surface to breathe. That is definately how it feels sometimes. This is a great peice! By the way, thanks for the review!~Helia |
| heartbroken922 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. very powerful and meaningful. you did a lovely job. thanks for your sweet review. |
| bahaghari 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseMust have been drowning... "Need to go to the surface to breathe..." It's nice... beautiful. I'll be back some time to read the others... very limited time. Oh, and, can i ask you a favor? I'd really like to get responses in my collection of poems, KRISTO. I'd really love to have you feedback. Thanks. Of course no pressure, read when you have time. |