|Reviews for The Spider and the Fly|
| IlovetheCoreys 10/4/08 . chapter 1
Wow. This piece reminds me of the character Rick Murray in the TV show "Degrassi: the Next Generation". Very brilliant and creative!
Keep up your awesome writing!
| Wonka's Scarlett Lollies 2/25/08 . chapter 1
amazing. I love pieces like this...one big metaphor.
| Shes Never Known Happy 7/28/06 . chapter 1
this is good i liked itvery creative
| Akana Akazen 7/23/06 . chapter 1
Wow... Creepily enough, this is a lot like a story idea I had late yesterday, even the kiss part. Of course, I came on here for the purpose of finding something similar and comparing/contrasting, so I guess I found what I was looking for.
Anyway, this is wonderfully done. It's short and straight to the point, perfectly metaphorical as intended.
| Sweet Roisin Dubh 4/24/06 . chapter 1
That was great! You know, you could really elaborate on this idea and turn it into a longer story...just a thought.
| Dark-Angel29 4/16/06 . chapter 1
wow... that was good, sad, but good. it kinda hit home for me... i know a guy that's like a spider, in the way you've described this person. he's kind and gentle and lures people in, makes them lov ehim, then hurts them, hurts them bad...
anyways... this was good