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| onyxdragonflyy 2006-04-15 ch 1,  | abuseOld english talk... God, that's great. |
| Ygg 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuseNice diction, especially the use of ink blothes combines with the lover's fair stare.. it leaves me pondering.. the flow is absolutely great! Rarely I encounter a Haiku or Senryu which can be read in one breath.. great work! |
| Embellished Heart 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Simply wonderful little poem. Keep it up! |