Quite good...been honing ur skills? haha, keep it up!

wow, so true. Beautifully written, you did a really god job with this.

Wow... thats so true! I'm glad that when you wrote this you were able to use the right words to express the naiveness of children about their view of the world. I can just close my eyes and remember way back when and how it is now =) good job.

aww.. this poem reminds me of when i was little.

all the things in it are so true. i miss being little. everything could be made better just because mommy and daddy said so. it makes me wonder how many times they bailed me out with out me realizing it.

I liked this poem! It makes a lot of sense and it has some interesting feelings!

Thanks for reviewing to "A Wilted Rose"...If you want you can check out my other stories...

This was a cool poem! ^_^

I loved the intro, it was very strong. But things trailed off for me, it flowed smoothly enough but the stanzas just left me wanting something more/different. Something comparable to the 1st stanza

Yeah, that's a good point there.I miss my childhood days...