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| Seraph Strike 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuseI loved this until the last line as well, it just seemed to fall there. Catchy otherwise though, keep writing! |
| Anaare 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, I enjoyed it. Good work! |
| Mr. Raven 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuseshort. sweet. and i love the last two lines. great! Mr.Raven |
| Malice-Deschain 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this poem until the last line... It has a very catchy beat and the imagery is awesome... Rhyming want with want doesn't quite fit to me for some reason though... Other than that, I quite enjoyed this. Well done. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuseSimple yet effective. Good job. Write on! ~Anna~ |