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Reviews For: World Without Sound

Seraph Strike
2006-04-05
ch 1,
abuseI loved this until the last line as well, it just seemed to fall there. Catchy otherwise though, keep writing!
Anaare
2006-04-05
ch 1,
abuseVery nice, I enjoyed it. Good work!
Mr. Raven
2006-04-05
ch 1,
abuseshort. sweet. and i love the last two lines. great!

Mr.Raven
Malice-Deschain
2006-04-05
ch 1,
abuseI really enjoyed this poem until the last line... It has a very catchy beat and the imagery is awesome... Rhyming want with want doesn't quite fit to me for some reason though... Other than that, I quite enjoyed this. Well done.
Princess-anna57
2006-04-05
ch 1,
abuseSimple yet effective. Good job. Write on!

~Anna~
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