|Reviews for Unraveled|
| Amanda Drowry 1/30/07 . chapter 1
Keep writing Talon! You speak the truth that so many are scared to, and that others cannot find the proper words to voice.
| Chandra-Moon 6/17/06 . chapter 1
You are very philosophical in your poems, and I like it. I think sometimes, though, they feel a bit tiring, when the same sentence structure is used over and over, so maybe try mixing it up a bit? Repetition and parallelism are great, but you can have too much.
| Luma 5/18/06 . chapter 1
Wow, so much wisdom. I really like how you've tied the poem together - it's amazingly well done. Keep it up.
| The Postscript 4/5/06 . chapter 1
Good wisdom, I like all the aspects in this - and I would have hated this had you not tied them all together as well. Great job with that...I dislike writers who try to do too much with a certian piece but this was wonderful. Keep it up, s.