This is amazing. Also thanks for the review!

Best Wishes!

Nice use of fairy-tale imagery, and lovely last line. This works really well, nice one.

- gold against the soul

Wow very cool. I'm really into the fairy tale thing, so of course I really like this. I'm not sure I understand the learn to drown part though.

I really liked this...there were a few lines near the middle that sort of seemed a tad bit short, but other than that, good one. I especially like the last two lines.