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| DemonicDestiny 2006-11-27 ch 1,  | abuseThat's so sweet that you'd dedicate a poem to Gaia. It's great that you show'd exactly how it it you feel and how you think of her. Great job on this poem. Keep writing. =D |
| BlueSaviour15 2006-08-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good poem. There is one part however where you go "The forest I ran in" and after some similar statements "And air I breathe". A bit soon to change past and present speech but I understand where you were coming from. It'd also be nice if it was organized in little paragraphs, but one liner's are easy to read too. Good job. |
| Ashelin 2006-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is a nice poem, though I do see how how we may disagree so. I don't believe that there are multiple truths. I think there is the truth, and the lie. Please don't tell me I know "a truth" because I don't. I believe in The Truth. I don't believe in this gray area "whats good for you is okay, but whats good for me is right too". I don't get it, sorry. Thats just what I know. |