Short, yes, but along the lines of Nora Jones, who I adore and relate so much to her lyrics. I can definitely hear this...and I love the last line...kind of trailing away. As odd as it is, this sounds so...peaceful.

I look forward to going and reading all the tracks from the beginning, now that I've read the ending.

Do you think you'll actually get it produced? Or have you?

kool lyrics, and an overall onderful flow... itz kinda short for a song, tho... dont get me wrong.. itz an awesome piece, just short. :)