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Reviews For: Sunshine

classic violet
2006-04-10
ch 1,
abusetruly elegant & so beautiful.especially: "Somehow torture becomes my love" lovely job.
hoowdoideletethisaccount
2006-04-10
ch 1,
abuse-From it’s binding chains- *its

The line I like in here is -Your smile is made of sun- It's like a beam of light to cling to amidst the shadows and confusion. It's a beautiful line. I really love it.
Nyghts Dark Desire
2006-04-07
ch 1,
abuseHeartwarming, really. It has a song like feel, but I think that's due t the formating and my aditory halucinations. Regardless, I love it. the metaphor of having a smile like the sun is strong. Keep up the good work. ^-~~NyghtsDarkDesire
Fabian Cortez
2006-04-06
ch 1,
abuseIntense, engrossing and moving piece.

Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C
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