truly elegant & so beautiful.especially: "Somehow torture becomes my love" lovely job.

-From it’s binding chains- *its

The line I like in here is -Your smile is made of sun- It's like a beam of light to cling to amidst the shadows and confusion. It's a beautiful line. I really love it.

Heartwarming, really. It has a song like feel, but I think that's due t the formating and my aditory halucinations. Regardless, I love it. the metaphor of having a smile like the sun is strong. Keep up the good work. ^-~~NyghtsDarkDesire

Intense, engrossing and moving piece.

Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C