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| classic violet 2006-04-10 ch 1,  | abusetruly elegant & so beautiful.especially: "Somehow torture becomes my love" lovely job. |
| hoowdoideletethisaccount 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuse-From it’s binding chains- *its The line I like in here is -Your smile is made of sun- It's like a beam of light to cling to amidst the shadows and confusion. It's a beautiful line. I really love it. |
| Nyghts Dark Desire 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abuseHeartwarming, really. It has a song like feel, but I think that's due t the formating and my aditory halucinations. Regardless, I love it. the metaphor of having a smile like the sun is strong. Keep up the good work. ^-~~NyghtsDarkDesire |
| Fabian Cortez 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseIntense, engrossing and moving piece. Well Done KEEP WRITING! F.C |