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RubyXSerpent 2008-07-22 ch 19,	abuseHoly. Shit. Best story I've read in a long time! This is another one of those stories where you just can't stop reading. In fact, the only time I stopped was to sleep. I'd looked up at the clock and saw it was 1 AM, haha, I was just so into your story. And now I've finished, and I'm kinda sad to see it end. You're a great writer; wonderful style! I am amazed. XD Now I'm off to read more of your brilliant work! XD
Ty Taco 2008-05-12 ch 1,	abuseI would have no problem putting her away. Just reviewing to tell you I will be reading your novel. looks good so far. xoxoxo, Ty
Duuude 2008-04-29 ch 19,	abuseOMG! Good Story. I loved it. So good. I say Pleasure in a Stall is still better though! Haha. Gotta love me some washroom sex. xD Anyway. so good. I was surprised that his mom died. Really really surprised. I was kinda hoping that his mom would turn normal and say she loved him and they'd frolick together in the grass. And she'd go do mother things... and Axel and Garron would show up and they'd threesome! Ya. Woo. YEAH COOL! Anyway, back to reality. I loved this ending. His mom dying made me really sad. Even though she never really did anything, I was still sad. I loved how Garron said it was ok for him to admit he was relieved. As selfish as it sounds, he's only a kid. And he's had a burden for so long, on top of feeling sad... I guess relief is only natural. =[ I kinda feel like things with Axel just disappeared. Like they didn't even talk about it at all. He just lived somewhere else in the epilogue. LOL I guess his brother will never know what happened with Wyatt and him. ... WYATT AND GARRON FOREVER! =3 YA. xD ... I think there's a picture drawn of Wyatt, yeah? I'll go check it out! >0< Lovely story, once again. Angsty, happy, corny, nerdy, hot and beautiful all at the same time. Great job. =D
Cinera 2008-04-03 ch 8,	abuseI don't understand Wyatt's hesitance in telling Axel, but it adds well to the story. Garron has to be the cutest guy I've ever read about. I love this story.
Cinera 2008-04-02 ch 4,	abuseHa, these are two of the cutest people I've ever met. I do indeed love this story.
Cinera 2008-04-02 ch 1,	abuseI like this story. I feel for Wyatt, it's really hard to take care of someone like that.
NikkiTheProcrastinator 2008-03-08 ch 19,	abuseAww!! :] I feel in love with this story, and you are, like, the MOST AMAZING SLASH WRITER EVER!! I love you to pieces. :]
NikkiTheProcrastinator 2008-03-08 ch 1,	abuseO, sexy. :] I'm going to keep reading, haha.
Bedlam Chaos 2007-12-20 ch 20,	abuseI read it again. I had forgotten some of the main events and it was like reading it for the first time. In one row. I loved it. And love it. ;-)
Erisah Mae 2007-12-09 ch 19,	abuseGritty, authentic, subtly tragic, and yet still able to have a bittersweet happy ending. Beautiful work- I loved the characters, the twisted relationships, and the fact that you didn't hold back. Nice. Erisah
True.Randomness 2007-12-08 ch 20,	abuseThis story was wonderful because it was more realistic than most stories. I like that it showed the not so pretty sides of the characters and the faults in their relationships, but I loved that they pulled through at the end. I also loved the comedy it had it was good, not too much not to little. The writing was fantastic overall, the story went at a good pace, the character development was done skillfully, there weren't any writing errors I can think of, and the plot was magnificent. The only faults I could find in the story was that if left some things uncertain at some points, but it was fantastic overall. This is, I consider, one of your best works.
erasmuss 2007-12-07 ch 20,	abuseI really like the way you write. I doesnt piss me off, like most peoples -including my own- does. I found it really didfficult to put the faces to the characters in my head though, then about halfway through I pictured Wyatt as a sort of Kurt Cobain and it was all good. I like Kurt. You obviously know your characters well, and can write smutt that I dodnt find embarassing to read, so I'll give you the thumbs up on that. It gave a really good sence of place too. I am assuming it's supposed to be America somewhere but I kept seeing it like the sjittyer parts of germany. Oh- and this has to be the longest reveiw I have written so far, I will congradulate you on that to. ADD AUTHOR TO MY FAVORITE AUTHORS LIST AWAY!
mia5081 2007-12-06 ch 20,	abuseHaha, I love them :D ~Mia
Duzen Broken DreamZ 2007-12-06 ch 20,	abuseAYAYAYAYAYAY!! this was hystericall i loved it!
Naomi Schemer 2007-12-05 ch 20,	abuseYup, I read it on your myspace, but it's nice to know you're alive, if not completely well. I assume you have exams now? If so, good luck on them. It's nice seeing the characters for this story again, if only for a bit. I need to reread some of your stories some time, honestly. Every time I look through them I realize that there are stories that I completely forgot about. sigh But who has time to do that? Maybe over the break.

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