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| Chidori Nadare 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseNot your best, but seriously, it didn't suck. So full of emotion and it stings painfully. Keep writing! -C.N |
| Starrlena 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was very sweet. |
| simpleplan13 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuseit isnt your best, but it doesnt suck.. the ending part about begging for love and solid figure was really cool |
| AllyCred 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI like it, very powerful and strong, i sense a lot of pain and hurt radiating from this! Great Job! |
| thesquidwithin 2006-04-09 ch 1, | abusevery touching. |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI dont think that sucked...i thought it was really good...i loved the bold, italic and underlined words...they boosted the effectiveness of the poem...not many ppl can do that well..and u did great! Neways, great work..r&r me sumtime^_^ |