Not your best, but seriously, it didn't suck. So full of emotion and it stings painfully. Keep writing!

-C.N

I thought this was very sweet.

it isnt your best, but it doesnt suck.. the ending part about begging for love and solid figure was really cool

I like it, very powerful and strong, i sense a lot of pain and hurt radiating from this! Great Job!

very touching.

I dont think that sucked...i thought it was really good...i loved the bold, italic and underlined words...they boosted the effectiveness of the poem...not many ppl can do that well..and u did great! Neways, great work..r&r me sumtime^_^