"like stars that explode into a thousand tiny sparks on a whim, we are brilliant."

YOU are brilliant, for heaven's sakes.

i love your poems that are sometimes (mostly) descriptions in disguise, how you so perfectly manage to capture every scene that you imagine/experience in words. there's a singular beauty i see in your poems that i can't describe.

perhaps it is foolishly romantic but i still entertain the hope that you will start posting here, someday.

It brings to mind the image of my friend Caitlyn..whimsical and spontaneous and true..You truly have a talent for words.

Another fantastic poem about a romance that transcends the ordinary.

This, too, is going in my favorites.

(I have been reading from number 30 up to number 1...and loving each one more and more...I rarely read the entire works of one author...but you are in that small group...I shall keep up with your work from here on out.)

o, pretty and airy and magnificent, i like it, it smells nice, beautifully done

You capture this image perfectly in liquid, sparkly languague. Lovely style. A good write.

It's sometimes hard to see if what you've written is great or not due to mix reviews. so thanks alot for your comment :)

Great descriptions here, highly visual.

i like the numerous observations in this piece..the details like the people who "(stared) at (you) over their coffee"...also , i felt that the progression of the piece into the whimsicality of the 2nd paragraph takes place quite smoothly, without much awkwardness, ..and makes for an easy read..do keep writing :D

I like how it captures that adults always overlook the intelligence in teenagers. 'sparks on a whim' is beautiful. nice job. ~*

I love this! I love the imagery, I love the wording, I love the message. I can definitly relate. Great job!

"We are brilliant". That is such a sure-of-itself declaration, that you almost can't help believing it. The first line is catching and enticing.