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psykoteddy 2009-04-23 . chapter 1
Holy...

...I LOVE IT!! Ahahahahaha, that was funny, and cute. For some reason I can totally imagine two of my friends actually...doing all that. Sex included. Heh. I can't save you from My Humps since now that freaking song is stuck in my (twisted, dirty) mind now too...*pouts*. Thanks a whole lot, y'know?? Anyways. On to your other oneshots...;)
Satan'z Myth 2009-03-30 . chapter 1
Sweet and funny..:D Nothing much to say, I guess. It did get confusing at parts...I like that it's uncomprehendable whether he was joking or being serious...:D Or both !
IchigoPudding 2009-03-21 . chapter 1
Hehe cute... In a sick, demented way >:)

~IP~
JtheChosen1 2008-09-05 . chapter 1
god i love locker room sex! luved the humor here as well!
failte200 2007-03-30 . chapter 1
I KILL YOU!!

lol

Okay - so you had fun writing it. I get that. But... you're not all that bad, y'know. Pretty good, actually. Be a lot better if you'd stop TALKING TO THE READER - but like I said - you were having fun.

More angst! More fluff! Don't make it so easy for them!

"They had sex." "The end."

lol Fine. Be that way. I get the feeling your friends all read these things, and you're afraid of trying to look too serious. If so - get another account.

Let's try another one...
InsanePhoenix 2007-01-25 . chapter 1
You really don't like writing endings, do you?
The Intelligent Designer 2006-12-29 . chapter 1
That was hilarious! I was almost crying from laughter at the end! I actually like the random interjection of "My Humps" Fits storyline, and I have that song memorized. Very Funny.
magalina 2006-12-10 . chapter 1
lol

They had sex. The end.

Your stories are hilarious!
InstantOatmeal 2006-11-14 . chapter 1
Oh, I was in flippin' hysterics...After the 'cough-furball' line I couldn't stop laughing until the end of the story! Your sense of humor is brilliant and coupled up with a bit o' yaoi/slash/MM, it is simply my dream story!
You've truly won me over!
BreathingFlames 2006-07-14 . chapter 1
*giggles hysterically*

I love you.
ShadowGal 2006-04-26 . chapter 1
*snickers* Well, say all the bad things you want to about it, but this little ficlet made me laugh. I like laughing, thus I like the ficlet. *nods*
Wynter Ravenheart 2006-04-14 . chapter 1
Loved!

really... it's soo funny ^^;;

but, don't put author notes in the middle of the fic... it completelly ruins the flow :/
Limited Edition 2006-04-14 . chapter 1
Insanely cute, insanely funny. My only objection is that it's so...messy somehow. But I loved it. It's very fresh!
Maris. S 2006-04-12 . chapter 1
*lol* This was a really cute story. Insanly funny though ^^ And I love the ending ^^
Strange.Synchronicity 2006-04-06 . chapter 1
Yay for funny stories. Mega yay for first stories in months!
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