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| failte200 2007-03-30 ch 1,  | abuseI KILL YOU!! lol Okay - so you had fun writing it. I get that. But... you're not all that bad, y'know. Pretty good, actually. Be a lot better if you'd stop TALKING TO THE READER - but like I said - you were having fun. More angst! More fluff! Don't make it so easy for them! "They had sex." "The end." lol Fine. Be that way. I get the feeling your friends all read these things, and you're afraid of trying to look too serious. If so - get another account. Let's try another one... |
| InsanePhoenix 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abuseYou really don't like writing endings, do you? |
| The Intelligent Designer 2006-12-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was hilarious! I was almost crying from laughter at the end! I actually like the random interjection of "My Humps" Fits storyline, and I have that song memorized. Very Funny. |
| magalina 2006-12-10 ch 1, | abuselol They had sex. The end. Your stories are hilarious! |
| InstantOatmeal 2006-11-14 ch 1, | abuseOh, I was in flippin' hysterics...After the 'cough-furball' line I couldn't stop laughing until the end of the story! Your sense of humor is brilliant and coupled up with a bit o' yaoi/slash/MM, it is simply my dream story! You've truly won me over! |
| BreathingFlames 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuse*giggles hysterically* I love you. |
| Shadow 3013 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuse*snickers* Well, say all the bad things you want to about it, but this little ficlet made me laugh. I like laughing, thus I like the ficlet. *nods* |
| Dream Killer 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseLoved! really... it's soo funny ^^;; but, don't put author notes in the middle of the fic... it completelly ruins the flow :/ |
| Limited Edition 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseInsanely cute, insanely funny. My only objection is that it's so...messy somehow. But I loved it. It's very fresh! |
| Maris. S 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuse*lol* This was a really cute story. Insanly funny though ^^ And I love the ending ^^ |
| xxbloody-heartsxx 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseYay for funny stories. Mega yay for first stories in months! |
| Espantalho 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseHa ha ha!! That was amazingly hilarious :) I love your author's notes and line breaks, and your characters are so cute!! =D I love it!! |
| Esquirella 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseVery cute so far. |
| Lightning Storm 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseSaying that it took long to write this is an understatement, lol. It was good all the same though, I could bearly stop laughing. I can't stand that song either. As soon as I get that song out of my head, my dad comes home and starts singing it and dancing to his own beat. Hes not a small man either, so its not pretty. Good job on the story btw. |
| xanthofile 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseyou cleaned it up so nicely! i nearly died laughing, this was...so effing hilarious. and you think you've got a bad song stuck in your head? try having the Imaginagtion song from the original Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory. "come with me, and you'll be, in a world of pure imagination!" *stabs eyes* but ok, again, this was uber cute. not horrific at all. although...no sexy sex scene. *deadpan* not good, not good at all. i was hoping for smut. me likey the smut. ah, need to quit while i'm ahead. ta! |