Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Pink

failte200
2007-03-30
ch 1,
abuseI KILL YOU!!

lol

Okay - so you had fun writing it. I get that. But... you're not all that bad, y'know. Pretty good, actually. Be a lot better if you'd stop TALKING TO THE READER - but like I said - you were having fun.

More angst! More fluff! Don't make it so easy for them!

"They had sex." "The end."

lol Fine. Be that way. I get the feeling your friends all read these things, and you're afraid of trying to look too serious. If so - get another account.

Let's try another one...
InsanePhoenix
2007-01-25
ch 1,
abuseYou really don't like writing endings, do you?
The Intelligent Designer
2006-12-29
ch 1,
abuseThat was hilarious! I was almost crying from laughter at the end! I actually like the random interjection of "My Humps" Fits storyline, and I have that song memorized. Very Funny.
magalina
2006-12-10
ch 1,
abuselol

They had sex. The end.

Your stories are hilarious!
InstantOatmeal
2006-11-14
ch 1,
abuseOh, I was in flippin' hysterics...After the 'cough-furball' line I couldn't stop laughing until the end of the story! Your sense of humor is brilliant and coupled up with a bit o' yaoi/slash/MM, it is simply my dream story!
You've truly won me over!
BreathingFlames
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abuse*giggles hysterically*

I love you.
Shadow 3013
2006-04-26
ch 1,
abuse*snickers* Well, say all the bad things you want to about it, but this little ficlet made me laugh. I like laughing, thus I like the ficlet. *nods*
Dream Killer
2006-04-14
ch 1,
abuseLoved!

really... it's soo funny ^^;;

but, don't put author notes in the middle of the fic... it completelly ruins the flow :/
Limited Edition
2006-04-14
ch 1,
abuseInsanely cute, insanely funny. My only objection is that it's so...messy somehow. But I loved it. It's very fresh!
Maris. S
2006-04-12
ch 1,
abuse*lol* This was a really cute story. Insanly funny though ^^ And I love the ending ^^
xxbloody-heartsxx
2006-04-06
ch 1,
abuseYay for funny stories. Mega yay for first stories in months!
Espantalho
2006-04-06
ch 1,
abuseHa ha ha!! That was amazingly hilarious :) I love your author's notes and line breaks, and your characters are so cute!! =D I love it!!
Esquirella
2006-04-06
ch 1,
abuseVery cute so far.
Lightning Storm
2006-04-06
ch 1,
abuseSaying that it took long to write this is an understatement, lol. It was good all the same though, I could bearly stop laughing.

I can't stand that song either. As soon as I get that song out of my head, my dad comes home and starts singing it and dancing to his own beat. Hes not a small man either, so its not pretty.

Good job on the story btw.
xanthofile
2006-04-06
ch 1,
abuseyou cleaned it up so nicely! i nearly died laughing, this was...so effing hilarious.

and you think you've got a bad song stuck in your head? try having the Imaginagtion song from the original Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory. "come with me, and you'll be, in a world of pure imagination!" *stabs eyes*

but ok, again, this was uber cute. not horrific at all. although...no sexy sex scene. *deadpan* not good, not good at all. i was hoping for smut. me likey the smut.

ah, need to quit while i'm ahead. ta!
Return to Top