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greenmcs 2008-01-06 . chapter 1
this is the saddest thing i have ever read. But it's really cute. I heart it.
squiggle-line 2006-04-06 . chapter 1
The secret admirer disappeared?! Definately wasn't expecting that. Kinda suspected it was Dave at first. I liked how you concluded it with "and she moved on." The letters were a good thing while it was going on, but not the end of the world when they stopped.

Transition between school and home when she gets the first note is a bit bumpy...transitions are always hard though.

I loved the comment about the blue paper being beautiful. Ihe extra thick writing paper that they sell at office supply stores always makes me happy too.

*off to read more!*
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