 squiggle-line 2006-04-06 . chapter 1The secret admirer disappeared?! Definately wasn't expecting that. Kinda suspected it was Dave at first. I liked how you concluded it with "and she moved on." The letters were a good thing while it was going on, but not the end of the world when they stopped.
Transition between school and home when she gets the first note is a bit bumpy...transitions are always hard though.
I loved the comment about the blue paper being beautiful. Ihe extra thick writing paper that they sell at office supply stores always makes me happy too.
*off to read more!* |