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| Amindaya 2007-06-17 ch 1,  | abuseWell, the summary was gorgeous, so points for that...and then the haiku itself was very enigmatic and gorgeous. Very nice. :) |
| strawberry memories 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseis it really madness? maybe it's just worry? anyway, i liked the depressed feel you were able to add to this haiku. the first line is awesome. |
| justbreathe241 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI love the imagery you create, good use of words too; nice work |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseGreat movement through the words. Well written haiku. |
| Cherise 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI could never write poems (because of the whole syllable thing) and this one is just .. very well written! Excellent descriptions, especially loved your portrayal of the waves. Great imagery, it was easy for me to imagine the frothing high waves that race to the beach. This haiku reminds me of the time when I was at a beach (it was cold and cloudy) and I remember seeing these vicious waves .. I really like this haiku! |