The emphasis you put on words helped a lot to carry this piece-though it could stand on its own.

Every writer has a signature, or somehting they do differently, and I find that beside the fact that you have a way with words, you know exactly where to place emphasis or stress a word or phrase. Wonderful job-that filled me with happiness. There aren't enough writers on here like you.

♥ Alice

definitely still able to deliver a delightful read.

kakyou

i like the format, especially the word broken, it becomes so much more visual and real, if you know what i mean^^ awesome work

keep writing!

your writing is always so cute x]. beautiful piece ^-^

interesting format. i especially enjoyed how you formatted certain words (scatter.. broken and etc.) Looking forward to your next update. - ADD-san

I liked this poem alot. I especially liked the first and last stanzas.

POOF!

Hi! Haven't seen you for a while and decided to play check up! I want to guess what this poem means, you don't mind do you?

Looks as though someone is either physically or emotionally dying because someone close to them has either died or broken their heart.

I love this! Makes my two poems look like...well...ick.

I hopes to see you soon!

the format is awesome. yep. me likes.

:3

~* Noelle

i like this.. the format is very cool.. awesome pieceq

I like the variety in looks. x3

Ooh, I definately liked the use of s-st-sta-stag-stage-stager-stageri-starerin-stagering those words in different ways. Defiantely an appealing tecnique...love it.

This poem conveys some very powerful feelings, even though it's short. Every emotion that you mention here is able to be well interpreted .. good job on this one!