so true! people definately need to stop whining and do something about their problems instead.

Yes, indeed...nothing like the present...wonderfully done! Keep it up! ^^

I so read this aloud to myself. And it indeed is so very true, but that wont stop me from complaining about everything and doing not a darn thing. I joke. Love. :)

nicely done. Very nicely done. It has a very powerful message, one that people would take a long while to accept and understand yet. Well done ~Silver

That was an awesome poem. It held so much meaning and importance. A really valuable lesson that I'm not sure many people are willing to accept just yet. But it was awesome. Keep writing and have fun!