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| XxParalaixX 2007-02-13 ch 1,  | abuseYou write such morbid poems, Braindead :P I like it, you're a very good poet. It has a very real feeling about it- very emotive too. |
| carousel chorus 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE this. Morbid, but absolutely beautiful |
| KingdomRain 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuseyour a little demonic arn't you? anyways... great poem... a little twisted but it's all good... keep writing |
| aurora llyria 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseYO! testing testing testing testing testing *Sorry to spam you like that, by the way. Here's my review of the actual poem: I find the subject very interesting, and I think you created a really good poem on that subject. It's like something I would think about a lot, I think. Anyway, 'tis cool. Even if it's rather awful as well. Yeah. |
| Autumn Dance 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseOk- I am ambiguous about this piece. I ADORE the lines "stab yourself thinking that my blood runs in your veins" That's clever but just the rest isn't as good as other stuff i've read. I dunno- I think it's good just I know it could be better. X |
| wolfeh 2006-04-24 ch 1, | abuseWow.Deep, dark, twisted ... amazing writing, again. ~wolfeh (4.39 in the pm) |
| shackled bleeding walls 2006-04-24 ch 1, | abusewow, yea very morbid but great and beautiful in a way. keep writing. Sabia |
| Rodwen Fefalas 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI love that! It's so dark! |
| Angel wearing Jeans 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseVery Morbid, and creepy.Awesome! |
| kissitgoodbye 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseMorbid but strangely pretty if you know what I mean.You're a very good writer.*Cliche warning ahead*Keep writing! |
| midnightcircus84 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseVery visual and Morbid! Excellent! |
| It Sounds Horrible 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseThe ending was unexpected, a pleasant surprise. |
| GerardYuroshi 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuse:cries: it was so MORBID..YAY I LOVE IT! Thanks :huggles:~Gerard |
| Ellin Louise 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting, good flow, well worded. |
| CrimsonSoulTears 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abuseomg this is so gd! Thanks 4 the fave. id luv u 2 write a poemfor me if u have time. im a goff lesbian if thats inspration. x im favin dis. read mi other poems if u need more info pls r&r!x |