I like this one too. good work!

Cool! I like the lines: Like all this is on purpose.//Just to have my heart on a tray,Write on!-nameless-

Wow amber that is good! ((o btw its me Brittany)) hey read my poems

Oh my... I feel so special, its the first time someone dedicated something to me... And its so good, something so good just for me? Oh... Dear, I don't know what to say anymore, I'm quite speechless for the first time! :)

As for the poem, I find that it now has rhymes! And I did love the way the words rhymed, good choice of words! You're not so bad a rhymer yourself! :) Good one! I see it really comes from the heart, *winks*, I know you know what I mean... :)

P.S. I love you, jhoney! I have never had a friend as sweet as you, nor as thoughtful! :)