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relapse into change 2007-12-24 ch 1,	abusegod, this poem is beautiful i can't believe i didn't review it sooner this would make a...awesomeamazingjustgreat song.. i adore the seventh, eighth, and ninth line 'i've got your neck but you've got the gun so i'll take your bullets one by one and when the last silver shell hts the floor' is just beautiful
Kaye90 2006-09-13 ch 1,	abusefunny thing is? it made me feel sick. that's powerful poetry.
Killing Karma 2006-05-27 ch 1,	abuseI like this piece a lot. Reminds me of "The Patriot" with Mel Gibson. It also makes me think of American History (no, not boring, just war-like).
Aquafied 2006-05-26 ch 1,	abusei hate therefore i am...-reminds me of a song. a nice song, an angry song, a song. this would make a great song.
Pesadilla Mortal 2006-04-10 ch 1,	abuseIt has a very good flow to it and the repetition of the first stanza really brought somethink out of them poem. The rhyming didn't sound forced, therefore re-enforcing my love for this poem. You are a stunning author, keep it up.
It Sounds Horrible 2006-04-10 ch 1,	abuse"i’ll break my knuckles on your face" That line is classic. It has a nice steady rhythm when you read it.
e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2006-04-09 ch 1,	abuseKinda reminded me of fight club for one reason or another...o__O lolthanks for the reviews! I really love them. And keep up the good work!
The Melancholy Astronaut 2006-04-08 ch 1,	abuseI really liked this. It really made me think.
Femme de Dieu 2006-04-08 ch 1,	abuseIt must be turned into a song... A hard rockin' song! Loved the "beat" of it...And the sense of wanting some closure. Hope you got it!
Riskaria 2006-04-08 ch 1,	abuseThy words fall through the sky and fall upon a heart that bleeds for that which is and shalt be
faking closure 2006-04-07 ch 1,	abusehmm i dont know if reviewing is a good thing or not... or i dont know if you wanted me to see this account or not (cause it says secret, i assumed its a secret? hits self duh naomi) if you dont want me to look at this account again i'll gladly oblige, i'd understand if its something you dont want to worry about me reading... but i just looked at my favorites list thingy shit crap thing and saw a new name on it and i was like hm okay too much rambling, if it counts for anything, i love this poem.. and things will always get better (yea not too convincing but lets at least pretend to be happy together?) i still promise not to look at your xanga unless you say its okay, yes, im a woman of my word :) you dont have to respond to this review unless you want to, though an email would be lovely, just to hear from you. still existing, (your one and only true love, heh) Naomi
AwkwardSilence 2006-04-07 ch 1,	abuseKick arse! It flows nicely, it's powerful, and it has a touch of crazy in it. I love it. Rock on.

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