Great work, well done. Keep it up!

Anna

ah such a great poem! i love music and all that great stuff! :) its been a while since i was on here but i figured id give you a shout and check out some of your new stuff. :) talk to you later!

How prettiful. I love line 9.

The imagery in this is amazing!

Goos job hun!

*jules*

Very dreamlike tone, it enhances the poem nicely. I also really like the imagery and how it progresses. ...I love sleep.

Jess 0:o)

Summaries aren't necessary, the poem speaks for itself. We all wish sometimes to never wake up and rest in that eternal sleep. The contrast of sound with something that should be at odds like sleep is good and the almost dreamlike descriptions gives the reader a taste of what such a sleep may be like.

This paints a really vivid picture in my mind. Good job.