|Reviews for The Witch's Paramour|
| Kristina Suko 9/10/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful story. That's all I can say.
D Maranwe Telrunya
| amenokodomo 8/10/06 . chapter 1
Wow... you don't see poetry like this very often. Awesome job!
| White is a Sin 7/19/06 . chapter 1
*wipes off beads of sweat* Wow that was pretty long! Though long it's still really good, you're a talented writer! Nice detail and use of vocabulary. _ *Applaudes* Do you think you'll write more poetry? I wouldn't mind reading it at all.
| bahaghari 4/20/06 . chapter 1
Wow, nice rhyming scheme. Not boring.
| Randomisation 4/13/06 . chapter 1
wo0w! this is amazing! i luv this so much!
| SeaVoi 4/11/06 . chapter 1
You have selected some very good words here, plus the page breaks separate your thoughts it’s kind of cool.
| bleed gilead 4/7/06 . chapter 1
fantastic word choice and pacing, love how much attention you pay to detail.
| run rabbit run 4/7/06 . chapter 1
uh... gee... i dunno what happened but i swear i just read and reviewed this... anyway... i will just repeat what i had said in the other one... *stands and applauds* i love it. great descriptions and wonderful vignette. really nice work. cheers-rabbit
| Frore 4/7/06 . chapter 1
Ha! I'm reviewing your story under your penname! Well, anyway,this s a really awesome poem. It really portrays the anguish of losing a lover and your to the fires of insufferble paranoid morons. Keep up the writing of which I am so -Jen
| Coralollie 4/7/06 . chapter 1
wow, the way you've written this is amazing! keep up the awsumness _cozza
| Dante's Disciple 4/6/06 . chapter 1
Wow! That was incredible! The story was great of course but I loved the way that not only did you finsih every second line with a rhyme which is sometimes a challenge in itself, but all you have words rhyming within each line to allowing for the perfect flow to the whole piece. As for the ending- well tragic endings are usualy the most memorable anyway :) Anyway, excellent work, more like this please! :)
| Faithless Juliet 4/6/06 . chapter 1
I loved the detail and storytelling in this. Well done.