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| SmoothAmbiguity 2008-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story gave me a boner. |
| HHOrion 2008-06-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI got linked here off the SA ghost stories thread. The poster didn't really warn about the story - only said how deeply disturbing and beautiful it was. My God they undersold it. This was fantastic! So sinister in a way but its incredibly well written. Hats off. |
| 99 Apple Schnapps 2008-02-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseAfter all this time I still cannot put into words how beautiful this story is. |
| Jelly Wombat 2007-10-30 ch 1,  | abuseI found the link on SA too. :) Whoa, this is SO amazingly good. I definitely got a mental image for the 'guardian' here...unfortunately. Yeesh, I'll never get to sleep tonight. *fav story* |
| Azyziah Donovan 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseThis was a great story. I found your link in SA. (If you end up reading any of my stories, remember, they were all written in highschool and thusly are pretty sucky.) |
| des-avions-en-papier 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseHeard about this from SA... This story was more than merely unsettling, it was terrifying. This should be in that 'Scary Stories To Tell In The Dark' book. |
| ZeKe 2007-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseAmazing...::save!:: |
| Snowfox 2007-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood Gods. Came here from SA, and... wow. I've read many published pieces that can't hold a candle to this. Do you (or do you plan to) write professionally? If not, I'd suggest you give it some thought. If everything you write is this haunting and beautifully horrific, I'd fangirl you. ;) |
| Violet M. Aster 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this. Didn't expect the ending. Good job, beautiful writing. |
| Perfectly Strange 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abuseCREPY.I like it. I really think you should continue it. |
| Jenni Mills 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abuseOh that is so creepy. You got me in fully with this line"You played with your toys alone while I stared from all angles in nearby mirrors; my matted, clotted hair with oily sweat that hung off my dented forehead like glue." That was when I wondered what was wrong with the watcher (even though you hinted at something sinister in your summary).Do you have any plans to sen this to any publishers. I know Whispers of Wickedness would be interested. No pay, but a great site to be part of.Or you could try looking here for a suitable magazine. http://w.storypilot.com/ |