Good job. I like it.

Just wanted to comment on your author name. I think it's very cool.

-Elizabeth

interesting format and good flow...an enjoyable read...i'm terribly curious, though, about the significance of the name "Michael" being spelt out so explicitly in the poem... do keep writing :D

I love the formatting and the message that is conveyed.

WINKS ;)

XoXo

Fascinating perspective and detail; this is very well written, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.