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Rosefaerie
2007-06-05
ch 3, anon.
abuseTashi,
Oh, that's so sad! But a good beginning to the story. Write more soon! I want to know what happened!
Luv ya,
Rosefaerie
kylie
2006-06-17
ch 3, anon.
abuseThis is absolutely fantastic! Please update soon!
Jayn
2006-05-30
ch 3,
abuseIf they have to break up, what a way to do it. 'Oh honey, I'm cheating on you!' 'Damn you, oh well, I'm marring the Prince.' '...well my love says she'll stay with me.' 'She'll cheat on you again.' 'no she won't! *Starry eyes*'

Meh heh heh, I crack myself up. Hope things get better for her... even though they'll probable get worse before its gets better. Please update!
Glinda the Good
2006-05-30
ch 3, anon.
abuseo i like how it is going!
darknesslivesinu
2006-05-30
ch 3,
abuseReally like how the story is turning out! I can't wait until she meets Prince William. Are you basing the looks off of the real Prince William or is it going to be totaly different?
I Murder on Impulse
2006-05-30
ch 3,
abuseui
hafi
2006-05-29
ch 3, anon.
abuseToo ** a plot.
punkturnedwriter
2006-05-29
ch 3,
abuse'"I have to marry Prince William of Wales, second in line to the throne of England. It’s been a match set up by my father and Her Royal Majesty, the Queen of England. So, we couldn’t be going together anyway, honey. So, have fun with your **."'

Yay for Raven! COMEBACK!

Oh, poor, poor Mrs Graham. She wants her son to be with upper-middle-class Christina, when he could have had a Duke's daughter. But then again, she IS evil.:) Glad you updated so quickly. I love this story, in case I haven't mentioned it fifty times already. UPDATE SOON!
mo
2006-05-29
ch 3, anon.
abuseoh comon cheer up, prince william so much hotter! :) plz update soon!
Simply Lindsey
2006-05-29
ch 3,
abuseLoved it! Hey, don't you think it's funny? That you put R&R at the bottom when we've already read it? Hehe, I do...
Ollie May
2006-05-29
ch 3,
abuseVery nice! I like this story, I like the heroine, and of course I like that she's hating being engaged to the one of the most eligible bachelors on the entire planet!

Fabulous stuff, update when you can.

Ollie May
Shadow Demoness413
2006-05-29
ch 3,
abuseYEAH! IN YOUR FACE *HOLE! This story rocks. Although I normally don't like stories where it's about a real person I still liked it and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens. It seems to be well written so far and I like how you had her wondering about how true Todd was to her. It really made her seem more like a person.

Just a friendly warning though... Raven's awesome so far, but she's rich, beautiful, and every girl wants to be her... be careful to stay away from making her a Mary-Sue. She might not start out that way, but if you're not careful she easily can. I think this has great promise, so I'm not trying to tell you how to write it at all, I'm just saying.. be careful. It happens to everyone. :-D Good luck, I'm looking forward to seeing how this plays out.
ladyjayliz
2006-05-29
ch 3,
abuseLove the story...Can't wait to read more ;)
ana
2006-05-29
ch 3, anon.
abusethe story is good, but Prince william??!! no offense, but i am so sick of reading fictions about him. not only is it boreline freaky, but he isn't even that hot. couldn't you create some artificial prince?

i don't mean to sound too critical, because the story has really good potential otherwise.
secretshadow
2006-05-29
ch 3, anon.
abuseRaven has nice come backs! You go girl!! lol I do feel REALLY sorry for her though...Don't leave us hanging! Update soon!
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