This is an amazing story! I highly recommend it! Extremely good writing!

good story! really dark in places, it could have been reduced, or moved up to a "M" rating.

Pretty good story. Good enough to be a favorite. Can't help noticing that a few little things come from a certain country's culture. Which is good meaning I learned something.

*applause* they're a good match. *cracks up* that last scene was so clear in my mind...

I like this. it's very intense but good.

Over and out,

:) CD

Wow man what a surprising ending i expected this to go on for a least 10 more chapters but its ur story and im not gonna tell u how to write it. I wish u woulda showed some more interaction betwen Xankul and Kurren. I was all confused since when did they get married, and start datting its like u skipped forward some years.

Hm...Now I have to deal with the suspense...I cant hardly wait until you post the 12th chapter!

Wow, this is getting good.

-Timothy Hazelo

This chapter was quite amazing...I really enjoyed reading it.

Thank you so much for reviewing my story. That one is not the one I would have liked to be reviewed by you though. I am very thankfull that you reviewed, now I know what I did wrong, it would be very helpfull to me if you did that with my story, "Rising Smoke", but you may not have time...

Thanks!

Lol Xankul has a strange way of showing live but i guess it works. This chapter was touching. And shows Kurren is showing signs of recovering from her past.

Wow this was another deep chapter. I've fallen in love with Kurrens past.

Wow who would have knew Xankul was like that what an asswhole. ANd Great! Kurren finally killed that wreched Berlin i couldnt stand him!

Wow that was deep...thats all i gotta say about this one.

Wow this story is getting better and better! This was great. The relationship is to good! I needed aread like this so i could learn how to relationships and you showed me a bit of that thanks you my friend.

Wow that rotten snot berlin got her! He's creepy! I Dont like him!

Another sound chapter I like how Kurren is playin hard to get and how Xankul is making his move. Very good indeed.