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| agirlnamed-aly 2006-04-09 ch 1,  | abuseThis truly was an awe-inspiring, filled to the brim with lavish description and narrative flair. The only critique I might have is that there are a few grammar errors, but besides that it's wonderful. The fact that it's so naturally personal is refreshing, and the slight perspective into the two character's past relationship is very interesting. xoxo Aly |