nice chapter... now write more :) please... (I was so happy to see that you had written some on one of your stories...)

Alright! Another story to look forward to updates from! Lirra you're awesome. And so are selkies =]

hey, it would be awesome if you could continue this. i know it's been a few years, but this is a really good story you've got started. =]

That's really good so far! Not even kidding. I can't wait until you update :D feel free to read some of my stories and maybe you can pass me some of your skill. lol

Watch out for spelling! In the first chapter you have a cam instead of a came.

I still am left hanging and want you to write more.

Other than that, really nice story.

wow! this is cool! is she a mermaid? I WANNA KNOW! please update soon or i will be forced to search the world for that damn cove so i can ask coleen myself!

Wow, this story is really good! I like Selkies, though I don't know all that much about them. There are a few spelling errors in this, but aside from that it's great. Update soon!

Oh, I really want the next chapter now! I love Selkies--they're by far my favourite European fae-creatures. I'm so excited to find another writer who is as entranced by them as I am. (I've got a partial short story about selkies, too, as well as several pieces of artwork).

Tiny tip: There are two different kinds of "then" (or "than"), and you often use than when you should be using then.

I think I see where this story is going and I like it. I really like the detail about Colleen having dyslexia, and I can't wait to hear the rest of the explanation about that.

Lirra, dearling, I love it! Very nice descriptions and smilies and metaphors and language. Your writing has too improved, whether you believe it or not. You're going to be an amazing writer one day, not that you aren't now. ^_^ Your character is very nice, work on not being so repetitive and normal in word choice. Wonderful story though, it deserves a standind ovation (sp).

Newsies: *stand up and clap vigorously* WOT!

David: I LOVE YOU LIRRA! *clapclapclapwolfwhistleclapclapclaphophopskipskipjumpjumpclapclapclap*

There you go, Lirra, your own cheering section. ^_~ Catch you on the next chapter!

Daydream, your loyal reader/friendShades, your loyal friend/reader