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| Sirivinda 2006-07-21 ch 1,  | abuseWow, that's sad. I especially like "the one I loved, the one I hated, the one I took, the one I baited". I like how you play with opposites. And also, I hastily added you on my msn in a impulsive attempt to discuss history with you. Just so you know. ;) |
| empty-spiral 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseunderstood that one. sad, but well written. one thing, though, you said it was because of a fight between lovers, but didn't really make it clear as to why the one died... unless it was meant to be unclear? i dont know, its 3 am and if im absolutley wrong about everything, im sorry. :) he yay yeah. |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abuseHeartfelt and well-detailed; you have strong convictions in your narration. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |