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| My heart is an icebox 2008-05-08 ch 1,  | abuseI really enjoyed this story, great job! |
| MiddiVampira 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseOh My fucking god. JEEZ that freaked me out, the whole time i was like ahh end end end end end. And the people and and jeez. All I can say that it was AMAZING like everything else I've read by you.Can't wait to read more. Love Middi |
| spikesagitta 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseinteresting...kinda harsh just to teach someone life's lesson through...haha... |
| Serpens Lupa 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseThis was positively terrifying and utterly beautiful all at the same time. I loved it. |
| Alice Quinto 2007-06-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseBrilliant... |
| FrozenRose313 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abusewoah. that was intense. i about died when--oh wait, right, can't give away teh story. anyways, i like your writing. thanks so much for reviewing all my chapters, it completely made my day you have no idea. nobody was reviewing and it sucked--then i checked my email to find your six reviews. it was great. |
| Cloudsinthesky 2006-05-27 ch 1, | abusewow |
| Lyralis 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this story. I found the characters personalitys facinating. Especially Shantra. She was a killer,yes, but I just found somthing about her appealing.Theres one or two typos and theres one place...*walks off to find it* ah, here we go."Marcia was thrust forward, deeply hitting the door"I thought 'Deeply hitting the door' was a bit awkard for the wording, but other than that this story was absolutly great! I will probably re read this a lotXD |
| ChobiMM3 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was one hell of a thiller. Hah, that 'fucking under the influence' bit was cute...So anyway, back to the review. This was a nice one shot; I have to admit it was kind of odd reading it; but only probably because I'm not used to reading thrillers by you, or thrillers in general.You had all the qualities of a good short: Memorable characters, a pants-wetting thiler,heart-pounding moments, and,hell,even drugs and sex. Who doesn't love that anyway? Hah, just kidding.There were 1 or2 typos, but no biggie. Like you said you wrote it at 4 AM. By the way I love the line at the end: "As if watching the tragic finale to a personal memoir" Beautiful. ^^ Well I'll shut up no since his review is long enough. Keep up the great work! |
| Daughter of the Equinox 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseThis story is very deep, and really makes me think and appreciate things. Great job! |