WOW! That was AWESOME/AMAZING. I'm not exactly one for action fiction because sometimes you can't tell what's happening of feel the stress/emotions that the characters are going through, but you did it so well that I didn't mind, in fact you did a great job and hit the nail on the head. I guess I wish I understood Shantra and why she did what she did a bit more, but otherwise it was pretty stellar. Congrats and great work. I loved that it even had morals without being preachy!

that was so amazing! my heart was beating sofast from the suspense. that was pretty sick. 2 _

I really enjoyed this story, great job!

Oh My fucking god. JEEZ that freaked me out, the whole time i was like ahh end end end end end. And the people and and jeez. All I can say that it was AMAZING like everything else I've read by 't wait to read more.

Love Middi

interesting...kinda harsh just to teach someone life's lesson through...haha...

This was positively terrifying and utterly beautiful all at the same time. I loved it.

Brilliant...

woah. that was intense. i about died when-oh wait, right, can't give away teh story. anyways, i like your writing.

thanks so much for reviewing all my chapters, it completely made my day you have no idea. nobody was reviewing and it sucked-then i checked my email to find your six reviews. it was great.

wow

I really liked this story. I found the characters personalitys facinating. Especially Shantra. She was a killer,yes, but I just found somthing about her one or two typos and theres one place...*walks off to find it* ah, here we go."Marcia was thrust forward, deeply hitting the door"I thought 'Deeply hitting the door' was a bit awkard for the wording, but other than that this story was absolutly great! I will probably re read this a lotXD

Wow, that was one hell of a thiller. Hah, that 'fucking under the influence' bit was cute...So anyway, back to the review. This was a nice one shot; I have to admit it was kind of odd reading it; but only probably because I'm not used to reading thrillers by you, or thrillers in had all the qualities of a good short: Memorable characters, a pants-wetting thiler,heart-pounding moments, and,hell,even drugs and sex. Who doesn't love that anyway? Hah, just were 1 or2 typos, but no biggie. Like you said you wrote it at 4 AM. By the way I love the line at the end: "As if watching the tragic finale to a personal memoir" Beautiful. Well I'll shut up no since his review is long enough. Keep up the great work!

This story is very deep, and really makes me think and appreciate things. Great job!