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| Cloak-of-Shadows 2006-04-18 ch 1,  | abuseI very much like the contradiction you put on the second the last line. 'And the agony is beautiful.' I also enjoyed the rhyme scheme. And the imagery...GREAT! |
| Philosophy101 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was an amazing poem, but I have to disagree; true love is perfect in it's flaws. Today, the word love is thrown around a lot, but if love truly exsists between two people, they will fix any problems with thier undying love. Your poem, to me, describes the illusion of love: a strong friendship. Sorry |
| classic violet 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseso very beautiful. |
| sunday night sky 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abusebeautiful imagery, i love this piece. it flows really well, and i love the analogy. great job. |
| ShadowPharoh 2006-04-09 ch 1, | abusewow. that was deep. like a sea. lol. ^_^ it is a beautiful poem. ^_^ it was an honour to read. ^_^ |
| nightslight 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful...i love the line "An intricate storm of loveliness" That one line sent my mind to imagine...very nice... |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is so true! WINKS ;) |
| Paper Bag Ghost 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseI am absolutely in love with this poem. It's going on my favouites so that I can look at when ever I want!! Awesome poem!! It sounds really awesome with Shekina By Blindside playing in the background!! |
| butterfly-touch 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful imagery. I love the way you describe love. Of course for some people love is the most beautiful thing that could ever happen. But for others, love is not so beautiful. Great job. |