Wow, very frightening! You really pulled me right into that car! Shocking ending, kinda creepy. Nice write!

Wow! This is amazing! The imagery is so vivid and detailed. I love your work, keep it up! ^^

Wow, great description. You caught me off guard there with the end but i liked this poem a lot. Your words and rhythm flow very nicely, and even though this isn't a rhyming poem, you made it flow like one. Nice Job!

Wow. That was a (good poem) weird dream.

Wow, made my stomach turn. Car wrecks scare me more than almost anything. Wonderful descriptions, nice poem. =)