hehehe! this made me laugh, it's funny how it rhymes so well and complains at the same time.

Heehee...I wrote one on complain except different of course. Good job!

Hehe! That sounds so good, spoken out loud! So true, so true... It's great!

Just one teeny-tiny thing: one the line "Oh, woes is me! Can't you even SEE?!", it should be "woe". :)