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| vampiric-happenings 2006-05-19 ch 6,  | abusethis is good, a few mistakes though; i don't know if it's name is 'will o wisps out' but that is how u said it twice-so perhaps that is it and i am wrong-, 'tgen well' probably then we'll. otherwise quite good. can't wait till you put up the next chapter! =) |
| tree plebian 2006-05-01 ch 1, | abusewoah. Is shad dead? Or one of them eaty people? Who knows. Is she not still affected by the bottle thing? And why do teh police know she's got it? And how? And anger bottle WELL AWESOME. |
| xCorix 2006-04-27 ch 6, | abusemm the plot thickens. |
| GerardYuroshi 2006-04-26 ch 6, | abuseO interesting...^-^ I can't wait for the next installment (HA! I sounded smart there!) Keep it up! ~Always~Kitty (that is what I am going to call myself now ^-^) |
| BlueDannyLew 2006-04-24 ch 5, | abuseI like how surreal this is. The dialouge between characters was especially cool and they are doing a good job moving the story along...almost like a play...with a heavy Metallica sound track ;D |
| GerardYuroshi 2006-04-23 ch 5, | abuseAw poor Alice...:huggles: Great chapter! Can't wait to read more! ~~Gerry |
| xCorix 2006-04-22 ch 5, | abuseinteresting. |
| vampiric-happenings 2006-04-22 ch 5, | abusei like this one as well! very good! some of it was a little strange to me, but still very nice! =)-you are officailly on my fav authors list. you are very good!- keep it going! |
| Eirama 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseI really loved your form. It went well with the rest of the poem. |
| GerardYuroshi 2006-04-20 ch 4, | abuseOo cliffy :wags finger: Update soon...I wanna see what happens... YAY Random peoples FUNYA! ~~Gerry |
| BlueDannyLew 2006-04-18 ch 4, | abuseDamn cliff hangers! WHY DO YOU TORMENT ME SO! |
| BlueDannyLew 2006-04-18 ch 3, | abuseAnger and rage are powerful addictions..tho very subtle addictions that don't make their impacts felt til the absolute last moment...then all Hell brakes loose! I liked how the two girls are talking with each other...even tho I'm still kind of confused about the storyline ;p |
| BlueDannyLew 2006-04-18 ch 2, | abuseWhat is she talking to...an imaginary friend? What's going to happen when she drinks the bottle?!?!? |
| DreamWriterZ09 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuseVery well-written...write on! |
| midnightcircus84 2006-04-16 ch 4, | abuseI can't wait to see more! |