 cajun-cuteness 2008-11-27 . chapter 8NO NONNONONONONNONONONONONONONO!
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 Noihseret 2007-01-27 . chapter 8okay... I guess I can wait. ^^ hope your 'something' turns out okay. I know I'm probably a bit late in saying this seeing how I haven't been online in a long while. we moved and my computer wasn't up until just a few weeks ago. anyway... see you next review! |
 Midnights Scream 2006-12-31 . chapter 8*crys* no it was cute and sweet and I want more *sniffle* I hope your writer's block goes away soon. |
 Midnights Scream 2006-12-31 . chapter 2Awha it's cute already. :) |
 Cedric Kale 2006-11-08 . chapter 1Kye is so emo |
 Cedric Kale 2006-11-08 . chapter 8aww fine i could wait a few more months |
 biscuit92 2006-11-06 . chapter 7i finished all 7 chapters this morning... and... ek! it's cute and i can't wait for the next one! XD it's light yaoi, but even so... it makes me squeel... hahahahaha! |
 Cryptic Warrior 2006-08-23 . chapter 6Personally i would have hit them. I wouldn't care if they were girls or not. They shouldn't do that to an unwilling person.
Ok i might be taking that too far, but oh well. I like your story though. |
 Cedric Kale 2006-08-23 . chapter 7Kiyoshi so does not know anything does he sorry i didn't revew for the other chapters it's just i couldn't wait to go onto the next chapter because your story is so good i want more me want more up date please |
 Noihseret 2006-08-22 . chapter 7*screams* UPDATE NOW! I want to see them kiss again! now that they're back home... and their conversation's not entirely over... UPDATE! I love this story ^^ I'm adding it to my favourites list! |
 Noihseret 2006-08-22 . chapter 6lol... crossdressing... bwahaha. this was great! I want to see more Hiroshi/Kiyoshi! (I like Yasuyuki too ^^) |
 Noihseret 2006-08-22 . chapter 5yey a Gravi fan!! I love Gravitation ^^
this chapter was really good! I liked the conversation between Kiyoshi and Hiroshi (the one ending in my favourite line: “I’m a total bad-boy! A rebel! I take risks all the time!”
“Like when?” He laughed.
“Like… When I unclogged your toilet!” LMFAO!)
anyhoo... must read more! |
 Noihseret 2006-08-22 . chapter 4oh man, what an awesome chapter! this is really getting good. poor little Kiyoshi... so clueless... so innocent. lol. just to throw this out there, he seems a bit childish for his age. I know there is a 10 year age difference between the boys, but it feels lke Kiyoshi acts a bit too young.
I really like this story!! chapter four and I'm already hooked!! ^^ |
 Noihseret 2006-08-22 . chapter 3this is so cute!! Kiyoshi's so cute!! (bad, bad perverted thoughts, lol) not that they'll get in Hiroshi's way... bwahaha. to the next chapter! |
 Noihseret 2006-08-22 . chapter 2wow this is really getting good! I like how you did the different point of views from each character. I like Kiyoshi the best though ^^
to the next chapter!! away! |