|Reviews for Punishing Solitude|
| Unforgettable-PoeticDreamer 10/6/08 . chapter 1
This is very good, I really like your rhyme scheme. The concept here was especially good, I feel like I can relate to this a lot which is possibly why it appeals to me to so.
I stumbled a little while reading towards the end and had to go back to figure out what was going on. It was after the line "And no place to go" - the lines after that one are where I started to struggle. I think there's a period or something missing somewhere down there but I could be wrong. The line "Are sentenced to locking" is a line in that mix that I tripped over but even so, this is still a good piece.
Overally, this is a really good piece. You used an excellent choice of words and I'm glad that I came across this poem. Nice work.