Is this the end? Because if it is; i really like it. i think evhting's going to be alright and that's what she deserves. send me something, maybe a reply, review or e-mail to let me know if it's the end.
--bye; Annie

I love Jeremy... I really feel for him, he's so romantic and kind and I just love him. He's a great character; I love him and Fay together.
--Ah-knee

OH MY GOD. I haven't review in so long, I feel so bad, so guilty, you have no idea. Why haven't I reviewed/read in so long? I can't give an honest answer, I don't honestly know. I'm so sorry, but don't expect you to forgive me. I feel really terrible, so I'm going to review for every chapter from now on, I didn't realize how much I missed this story, I really want to know what happened the night of her last hit. I like Jeremy, I hope they get back together. Alright, next chapter;
--Annie

this is a really good story you've got going. it's a bit short for my liking, but it's still good, love how you've put your characters together, and glad to say i'm the first to review chapter 11. hope to see a chapter 12 here soon, keep up the good work :)

wow, that was intense. no, not forced at all, it really works. (sorry it took so long to review by the way, i had forgotten that i didn't reviewthis chapter after reading it, oops) very tragic, but very well written. keep up the good work!

Cass and Anne here! (at Anne's house) Anne: Love:) this chapter could have been really cheesy, but you wrote it perfectly. it was perfectly done:). im glad that now we know more of the story of what happened that night. but im also glad that you didn't give its all to us in one shot. i can't decide if this is a happy or sad chapter though... x0x;Anne Cass:Sorry i haven't reviewed in ages, i was in Florida (yay!). love, love, love, this chapter. i agree with all that Anne said, but i hink it's a little sad (nothing wrong with sad though!) i can't believe Fay's dad hit Jeremy! :( it makes me so sad, especially cause my boyfriend's name is Jeremy (but thats besides the point). update really really soon! L0tsa L0ve-CaSS :D

thanks for the review. wow this story is is really great, keep it up :D

AW... YAY! such a happy chapter! things jsut keep getti better and better! :) i love this story! keep posting! :)x0xAnne

COMPLEAT AND TATAL HAPPINESS! YaY! They both thought the other person was dead, but neither ofthem were! sorry, i'm not making much sense, this is all jsut too perfect! :) things will come crashing down soon, i just know it! :| but i'm so happy! :D why wasn't Jeremy in school before now? why did he give her heroin?! what's going happen?! ah h h h h h h h h h! my life depends on your story, update soon!:)x0x

Jess: Hell yea, im still reading this! Yes, the mood was definatly lighter, Rory's gives me the shivers...he's wierd! oh yea, my friend Cass is here she wants to comment too.

Cass: Hey! i LOVE your story! sad, but happy(er now) i don't think Rory's so wierd, i think he'll end up going out with Fay or something, anywho, keep on posting! :)

i really hope "he"'s not dead, i really really really hope :( i feel so bad for Fay, she just seems like such a lost person... i hope she gets happy soon... Rory seems.. i dont know, strange. i know he'll have a bigger part in the story soon, and im egar to see what it is! personally, i think your chapters are the perfect length, nothing is over analyzed or rushed. each situation is given enough detail but not so much that your readers get distracted by the flowers you're discribing on the side of the road (if there are any flowers left that is...)

you're right, the mood is getting a little lighter, i think she may be getting over "him", but will he come back?

Hey, so glad you updated!:) her dad's a ... (refrains from saying several words that really aren't polite) and her mom's useless. it'm always amazed, you write so well! everything's so vivid you really feel for Fay and can see everything she sees. i really want to know more about that night, and that guy, its dring me crazy! keep up the good work!:)

Hey, Anne told me about your story, it's really good, really sad through. i love how its filled with detail :)

Pessimists aren't horrible, it sucks if you are one, but it gives you good amunition (sp?) for stories, trust me, I'm a hard core pessimist... You ARE doing very well, it's very well written, the modd is very presant, especially in this chapter with ay walking in the rain with her hair plastered to her face, it gives a very vivid image, very well done. You capture loneliness perfectly ~thumbs up~. I'm sure you'll get more reviewers soon, I've be telling people about your story, so you should have more reviews soon! :) I really like this chapter, you see her by herself, with her best friend, and with her dad, and see how she's different in each circumstance. Her drunken dad, again, very well described. As excited as i am to see how this turns out, don't rush. take your time, I'll check as often as i can to see if you updated!

So sad, i want to know more about this mysterious love of Fay's. is he real? If he is, is he really dead? post soon!:)