You won me over instantly with the first line. You won me over next, because I relate to this so much.

"atomic numbers ticking away underwaterdrinking away the rivers and the rainbows,diving into the deep end of the dead man’s grave"

Beautifully put.

my god :|. absolute cathartic snowstorm of beauty. i am in incandescent AWE. and - that - ending... it was so furtive & OMINOUS, my god my god i may Love you :|. favourites. so decisively definitely.

"& kings crept out again to feel the sun...".

beautiful and dripping with gorgeous imagery.

Another great one. Beautiful with great imagery. I love it.

wow, this was beautiful, the imagery was so vivid and I especially loved the imagery of the cat at the end. Great work, thankyou for sharing this.

Wow! that is truly amazing.It seems like your words are pulled from the air and stuck down on paper in just the right way to make it breathtaking. I love: "Spoonful of sunsets served with blue moons" I am in love (love, love) with this peom.

-Insane Rassbery

Too many awesome lines to pic favorites in this one...wonderful metaphors! I loved loved loved "cathedral eyes". It really stood out to meand as always,keep it up.

Absoutely fantastic. Just... wow.

amazing metaphors... lovely work! i especially LOVE the third stanza. beautiful.

meow meow, i heart the kitty imagery and the ship imagery and the cathedrail and philosophy and beach smells that come along with this one, makes me think of sunblock and spring time in old attics and just beautifully done, i adore it, to the nth power where n goes to infinity

My dear God/Lord, holy bloody hell. Excuse my french. This is amazing. This is so beautiful and elegant and fantastic in every possible way. It is pure poetry, it is so... real. Vivid & very very very well written. Just... God, fantastic. Just spectacular.

awesome metaphors- very creative!

Wow! I love the poem, but what are you talking about?

WINKS ;)

~XoXo~

all of it, but the ending especially, the cat and clockwork explosives and attics and stuff

mezzie

The imagery is really vivid. I have to say I relate better to your more down-to-earth poems, but this is a good read.