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| Knightmage 2007-05-17 ch 1, | abusethat was excellent sorry if i sound like a teacher.hehe maybe i should give u a tick anyway. that was awsome. ur awsome. everybody's awsome. okay, now im going off track but that plot was absolutely awsome(hehe) Knightmage |
| your harbor 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abuseThank you for reading/reviewing my story. It means a lot to me - so I'm doing the same for you except this time it's obviously your story, hah. Anyway... The grammar in your fic was good and I didn't notice any mistakes... the plot was pretty promising... the characters were decent... overall, it was a good story and I think I might actually read more from you since your plots seem promising and fun, hahahahah. |
| Rubina 2006-08-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW!! I was glued to the screen when I reading this. The sad part, i scrolled down at the bottom of the screen to see how long the story was, and in the beginning I knew the curse was greed, but still I started reading it and finished it and I LOVED it. I am pretty greedy myself, so I could totally understand what and why Rivers did what he did. |
| talyn/kelly 2006-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou know, I was thinking that chris was kind of cute too ;D but then he had to go and kill everyone... but then again, insane men can be hot too... |