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Reviews For: The Lighthouse at Reede Cove
greg0041 2006-04-09 . chapter 1
Amarllion: Good stuff. I really like your style of dialogue. Is there going to be more?

One thing, I do like the description of the people and the Hall, but I think i would add some more visuals, colors, maybe smells, sounds, ambiant noises, stuff like that.

I enjoyed it and keep up the good work.
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