The second stanza doesn't seem to match the pace of the first. I think it would build up better if you added in a stanza or two. nice repetition

tis cute! i dig, i really heart the woods too, a nice little piece here, wonderful job

I love how this has a double meaning(at least I think it does). I can just see that woods. I love this...

magic, simply magic. "fresh, cool air for me to love it so much more than before." beautiful imagery with a wonderful soothing effect. great job. ~*

i agree... woods are ace (forests are even better). lovely poem, like "a breath of that fresh, cool air". nice work.